Writing Assignment #1a: Focused Revision

for Blocks A & B: due 9/6/07
for Blocks C, D, and E: due 9/7/07

The Justin Wells mantra (which you may have heard from past English teachers as well) is “writing is rewriting.” To succeed this year, you must embrace this concept. First drafts can always be improved, and throughout the year, you must demonstrate to me and your peers what you have done to improve your work and why. This writing exercise gives you some practice with this.

Take a slice from your American Dream essay—at the very least, one full paragraph—and revise it into a better experience for your reader.

The nature of your revision will depend on what sorts of things you need to work on in your piece; that might mean flow, organization, transitions, precision of word choice, clarity of thought, specificity, persuasiveness, logic, entertainment value, or, most typically, some combination of these.

Here is what you need to turn in next class:

  1. a copy of your revision—either an entire essay or an excerpt. (If just a part is revised then please mark what it is.)
  2. one paragraph explaining your revision process: What kinds of changes did you make and how did they make the piece stronger? (This can be attached separately or included on the same sheet as your revision.)
  3. the original copy of your essay

Here are some approaches to consider:


Posted by Justin Wells : 09/08/2007